The ‘Mary Carroll Park’ as inspiration for my story ‘The Lake and the Ravens’

November 15, 2023

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In my second book ‘The Catalogue: Family Affairs’ I have a short story.

It’s a really short story, just one page and a half and it has a lot of nature description and birds, until something happens in that story and spoils the beauty.


Quite often the nature descriptions are not of interest to many readers which maybe are more into action and adventure and love stories but for me the story is inspired by and strongly connected with one of my favourite places – the Mary Carroll Park in Gosnells. That is in Western Australia, for the readers from far away.


Don’t you have a special place of your own? A park, a field, or maybe a beach. A place where you can walk and take in the nature or sit on a bench and soak up the wind on your face and the sun on your shoulders.


This is Mary Carroll Park for me.


The park that makes me smile and where I can enjoy with easiness a meditative walk.

In my walks with my Sammie-boi or without him, when the silence is so complete, and the world’s agitation so far away, and the stress of the day so insignificant, I suddenly notice the creatures around me. Here and there I can hear the conversations between the nature and the birds, and I can see the birds arguing with each other, and feeding their babies or chasing each other with flapping wings.


Just like any other citizens of this world.

They have neighbours and friends, and they have babies to feed.


The story is called ‘The Lake and the Ravens’ and an excerpt here:


‘The wind whispered over the tall greenery and must have scared a small creature, because something crawled away almost silently. Ducks flew in circles around a bush, annoyed by the crawling thing. The ducks landed near the path and slid through the same gap, following the crawler. They all disappeared, hidden by the banksias.


A dead tree trunk with its roots still sunk deep into the shore of the lake towered over the water. Somebody had taken time to paint the naked trunk a buoyant light blue. A carved wooden bench next to it invited walkers to sit and take in the lake with its surface coming to life and wait for the houses across the lake to appear out of the mist.’



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